New poster -SUM
My concept is "Blissed"
Old poster -SUM
This is my previous poster. I tried to make shape of sand glass.
Friday, October 9, 2015
SUM poster_boyoung hwang
Hello I am Boyoung Hwang.
New poster -SUM
My concept is "Blissed"
After reading a story "sum", I realized how present life of mine is full of bliss, and I came to appreciate my life. So, I tried to visualize the feeling of blissed, by types rising up to above where light shines, like angels ascend to heaven.
Old poster -SUM
This is my previous poster. I tried to make shape of sand glass.
New poster -SUM
My concept is "Blissed"
Old poster -SUM
This is my previous poster. I tried to make shape of sand glass.
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I actually think the poster you had last week better represents your concept. I think last week we talked about how it felt like going into a church. To me it feels like if you walk towards the middle white line you'll be lifted up to the white space above.
ReplyDeleteFor this week's poster I think the the white lines at the top look like rays of light and I kind of get the feeling that they're floating up towards it.
But I think last weeks, illustrates it more clearly and has that religious feeling.
The poster itself is good looking, I think you chose the right type, also the the scaling of types is working pretty good.
ReplyDeleteI am not sure, but maybe you need to put more light(white?) or something like that to emphasize your idea of "bliss"
i like the poster from last week too, it looked more blissful then this weeks, maybe you can combine what you did with the type this week to your poster last week, so it will look like the type is going into the white(blissful) space
ReplyDeleteI like both of posters. You give me a strong feeling about life is like angels ascend to heaven. I think the second week poster, maybe you can change your back grand like the first one, more contrast.
ReplyDeleteI like visual images of your both posters. It would be difficult to express “Blissed”. You said that types rising up to above, but It looks they are falling to me. I think it would be great if you can combine first poster’s visual and type with second week’s concept, like angles ascend to heaven.
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ReplyDeleteI like your concept is positive instead of bad emotion. Compare the second one with the first one, I like the first more. The type of the first one gives me feeling of rising up. May be you could put the scattered type at bottom. They don't have to gather together.
ReplyDeleteI definitely think your 1st week poster is more visually interesting/refined than your 2nd. Your 2nd week poster--I don't really get a sense that the type is ascending to the light. The light kind of looks like a scanning error? At least that was my first reaction. To make it more clear, I'd make the light take up more surface area on your poster, and work on it more visually, so that I can better understand that it's a type of heaven, and the type is rising to a "better" and "brighter" place. Also have the type not so clumped at the top, but ascending in a more graceful fashion.
ReplyDeleteI like both posters, I can clearly feel your concept of 'rising up above' from both posters
ReplyDeleteI like the idea, but i don't feel the type is rising, they are falling down for me
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