Saturday, October 17, 2015

Lei

I took some advices and changed mine a little bit.
My concept is life is a circle but there's something missing in this one.

I kept the circle and type around it, i enlarged the type so it's easier to read now and i made the tail of each sentence scattered just to make it feel like there's many space between and feel like there's something missing in between. and the whole circle don't look complete because of this.

New poster:


Last weeks:


2 comments:

  1. I think this weeks better, it looks more like missing. I think if there is a way to fill in the center of the newer one, or partially fill? It would look more like a shape and less like lines of a circle.

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  2. yeah
    i can get the feeling of the pieces getting separated
    and the emptiness/ space are increasing

    i am not sure if its done or not but i think its pretty successful

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