Hello.
I am HyejinKim.
My concept is "life is nothing"
I thought that life is nothing like disappearing smoke or wind.
I think the second poster relates more to your concept.
ReplyDeleteI'd suggest making the shapes of the letters even more like it's blown by destructing them so it has more movement.. to an extent where it is still readable.
This is definitely eye catching, and makes me want to read the text. Maybe if the imagery of the smoke/wind were to come up off the "sum" --like dust in a strong wind--it could better illustrate that the letters are wisping off the sum "like nothing and disappearing." Because right now, it just looks like the "sum" is smoking/burning.
ReplyDeleteI think second poster really succeeded in reflecting your concept. I really like how you organized it.
ReplyDeleteI think your second poster illustrates your concept much better. Could possibly illustrate the words to look more like they're coming off of sum, so it looks like sum is breaking down.
ReplyDeleteI agree with all of you about the second poster being a better expression of the concept, but it is an info-graphics project—every word has to be readable. So you should find a way how to balance the concept and the clearity. There are many ways to create a sense of whispering, disappearing, evaporating. it is not only a sigarette's smoke. Background is not necessarily should be black, you can reverse also. Keep going.
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