Kyle, I appreciate your efforts to use different typefaces—it feels refreshing, but I don't think es is good enough to represent eyescream maybe eyes-scream?. We need to read this word to pronounce it and feel the conflict between the sound and printed version. #4 is my least favourite—looks like a Princeton Review Machine font. Too muculine—has no connection to the theme. The last one was very good from the very beginning, but it is not done. Still not even letterspacing, hard to read. Try to use the same idea, but with not so generic typeface, maybe two typefaces? Where is your ice-cream track logo? The typeface was very good.
I like the last two, but like Olga said, the last one is a little bit hard to see... At first I want to say something like to add a line around the logo or something, but I think without the frame is better, maybe different typeface will make it better!
Kyle, I appreciate your efforts to use different typefaces—it feels refreshing, but I don't think es is good enough to represent eyescream maybe eyes-scream?. We need to read this word to pronounce it and feel the conflict between the sound and printed version.
ReplyDelete#4 is my least favourite—looks like a Princeton Review Machine font. Too muculine—has no connection to the theme. The last one was very good from the very beginning, but it is not done. Still not even letterspacing, hard to read. Try to use the same idea, but with not so generic typeface, maybe two typefaces? Where is your ice-cream track logo? The typeface was very good.
I like the last two, but like Olga said, the last one is a little bit hard to see...
ReplyDeleteAt first I want to say something like to add a line around the logo or something, but I think without the frame is better, maybe different typeface will make it better!